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Re: rain on roof tops[Updated]
You still have a few punctuation mistakes, but you fixed most of them up pretty good! Is Lynabar the middle name of some one you know too?? :) It doesn't ...
Apr 26, 2008 -
Re: Modern Penelope of Odysseus part 1
Okay, first of all, this is a beautifully written, very romantic story so far, but I'm not sure what this has to do with Odysseus and Penelope. Does that bit ...
Apr 26, 2008